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« Reply #15 on: March 16, 2008, 06:43:07 PM » |
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LOL Okay I am in big trouble now!!! Q, sweetie, I know better.  Especially after what you gave me the other day....mmmmm..... And NO I'm not gonna share with the rest of you.  oh no ur not getting outta this one that easly..share  |
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« Reply #16 on: March 16, 2008, 06:46:22 PM » |
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Darlin' you wouldn't enjoy that particular treat. Now the one I gave in exchange...you'd definitely enjoy!! : |
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« Reply #17 on: March 16, 2008, 07:11:59 PM » |
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maybe i wouldn't but mutt would..(always looking after other pplz needz:roll: ) speaking of a treat i'll need a double st. patrick demandz so |
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« Reply #18 on: March 16, 2008, 07:24:01 PM » |
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that's tomorrow
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« Reply #19 on: April 08, 2008, 09:55:22 AM » |
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we want more,we want more,we want more :) start writing u wannabe writer lol  |
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« Reply #20 on: April 08, 2008, 12:15:01 PM » |
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this wasn't meant as a real attempt,
more to see if it's as hard as jedi claims
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« Reply #21 on: April 08, 2008, 10:17:57 PM » |
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And look. No progress. He's got a wife & dogs to look after. You don't. Get writing. |
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« Reply #22 on: April 09, 2008, 06:10:09 AM » |
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chapter 2:
The nietzsche emerged from the subface rift
Smoked filled the bridge and alarms where sounding everywhere
"what's going on" demanded captain dumont
"Sir, the shock of exiting the rift alarmed our new croat contingent and they though the ship was being boarded. In panic they started firing on everything until they hit the overload buffer .. it's failed."
"what does that mean"
"we got 10 second before exploding"
"crap"
#boem#
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« Reply #23 on: April 09, 2008, 01:23:02 PM » |
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thatz it..no,no,no...more details...lol :)
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« Reply #24 on: April 10, 2008, 12:44:01 AM » |
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LMAO What a cop out ending!! |
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« Reply #25 on: April 10, 2008, 06:51:09 AM » |
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you wanted the story not to have an open ending  |
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« Reply #26 on: April 10, 2008, 09:21:28 PM » |
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Hmmmm the problem is we want to have the ability to imagine there is more to the story. That it doesn't truly end. |
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« Reply #27 on: May 13, 2008, 03:56:55 AM » |
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lol maybe the boom was the croat contingent blowing wind |
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« Reply #28 on: May 13, 2008, 07:27:33 PM » |
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« Reply #29 on: May 13, 2008, 08:09:31 PM » |
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the bang could be the captain shooting his first officer , scifi can always manage to re open a issue that seems closed
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